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staying awake too long makes men weep

   Discussion: staying awake too long makes men weep
Pacho · 22 years ago
i love this poem, i *love* this poem. there are so many levels to it. one example: the inversion of the keep/sleep rhyme scheme in the last two stanzas is something that i draw from my occult role-playing from back in the day. spells that use inversion are more powerful.

*moved*
Pacho · 22 years ago

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