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A film I wrote with Moxy Fruvous songs.

Did you like the script? Yes! It was perfect and I wouldn't change a word. It was really good. I don't know how to fix it but I am looking It was okay. I guess. I didn't like it. It sucks! It was the worse piece of crap I have ever read!   3 Votes - 2 Posts Results

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Reply Has Tall New Buildings on Apr 05 2010 @ 09:47pm
A film I wrote with Moxy Fruvous songs.

I wrote a movie and I would like feed back, this is my first draft. I have some ideas what I want to change for the second draft, but I am not ready to write it until I get some feed back. Please read it here, and let me know what you think?

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Reply Has Tall New Buildings on May 27 2010 @ 09:02pm
Help, please.

I have a movie-producer-friend who is willing to look at my script, so I need to do the next draft and I do need some criticism. If you are willing to help, I would appreciate it.

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